TITLE: BEHIND DOORS
| Sc | sec |
Picture |
Action |
Camera |
Character/ Animated Subject | Background |
Audio |
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00 | 4 | |
Introduction |
Camera hold |
Montage sequences |
Mixed media |
Syair |
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01 | 3 |
match dissolve with the keey hole ( d fish go at the key hole) |
House Still, leaf flown down from tree, wind blow |
Angle on , Long shot | leaf |
Kampong house |
syair |
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04 | 2 | |
NIL | Close- up | NIL | Kampong house door knob |
TV comedy program Sound fade in slowly |
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05 | 3 | dissolve |
NIL | Extreme Close up | NIL | Door knob keyhole | TV program volume increase |
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07 | 2 | |
NIL | Medium shot |
NIL | House living room |
TV program sound |
| 08 | 3 | pan |
NIL | Close up | NIL | Living room | Fade sound of TV |
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09 | 4 | pan |
Hand with cigarette. Rocking chair in front of TV |
Medium shot |
Hand, smoke |
Living room |
Sound of TV |
close up (tighther ) | crop | ||||||
| 11 | 4 |
follow the smoke up | Father exhale the smoke | Close up | Mouth |
Living room |
TV Breathing sound |
| 12 | 3 |
smoke dissolve into d spider , d spider dosent move |
Insect trapped in a spider web | Close up | Small insect | Bedroom |
Slow humming |
| 13 | 4 |
match dissolve, school bag, uniform on bed ready 4 tomoro neatly |
Ina sitting in front of mirror | High angle wide shot | Ina Fan | Bedroom |
Humming of Syair becomes more audible |
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14 | 3 |
pan out from the book to d next shot ( math books) neet, complete |
Ina in front of the mirror | High angle medium shot | Ina | Bedroom |
Humming |
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15 | 2 |
tilt up from d books | Stack of school books and drawings |
Camera pan Close up | NIL | Bedroom |
Humming |
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18 | 3 |
dissoilve (lightning - little reaction) |
Ina holding and caressing doll | Medium shot | Ina | Bedroom Window at the back | Humming Thunder |
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19 | 3 |
see reacting with d doll (thunder) |
Ina shocked by the sound of thunder |
Extreme close up | Ina facial expression | Bedroom |
Thunder calming down |
| 20 | 3 |
flip she react numb to the thunder ( she hears daddy caughing) exmp -jerry |
Ina turned to face the window | Medium close up | Ina | Bedroom |
Breathing Slow thunder |
| 22 | 4 |
dissolve - thunder | She slides a bit to back out of the brightness of the lightning |
Wide high angle |
Ina | bedroom |
Slow thunder |
| 23 | 2 |
she stands up | She stands up to get to the door |
Medium shot |
Ina | Bedroom | |
| 24 | 3 |
add cu .. closer up to the hand - |
She locks her door | Medium shot | Ina | Bedroom | |
| 25 | 3 |
clearer - she drops the key maybe - cos of coughing again - drop d key knocks books |
She moves back to the mirror | High angle close up | Ina’s legs | Bedroom floor | Her footsteps |
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26 | 3 |
more clearer in knocking the key nad books |
She accidentally knocks a stack of neatly stacked books |
Medium shot |
Ina from waist above | Bedroom |
Ina gasp |
| 27 | 3 | |
She quickly bend down | Medium shot | Ina | Bedroom | |
| 28 | 3 |
is a close up of 27 | Her hand reaches out to arrange the books |
Close up |
Ina | Bedroom | |
| 29 | 3 |
pan up quickly the smoke into the spider |
Hand put out cigarette |
Close up |
Father’s hand |
Living room |
Hissing sound of cigarette |
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30 | 4 |
spider head towards the insect zooming |
Father gets up from the chair | Medium shot | Father |
Living room | |
| 31 | 4 |
dissolve / combing try match dissolve with the spider with the doll with the eye zooming |
Ina is combing the doll’s hair | Close up | Hand holding doll | Bedroom |
Syair |
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32 | 3 |
dissolve / morphing | Ina is sleeping | High angle shot | Ina | Bedroom |
Syair Knocking on the door Calling her |
| 33 | 3 |
cut | Father knocking on her door and calling her name |
Low angle shot |
NIL | Bedroom |
Syair Knocking Calling Ina's name |
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34 | 2 | |
Ina moves in her sleep | Zoom to middle shot | Ina | Bedroom |
Syair in background |
| 35 | 3 | |
Knocking continues | Low angle shot | NIL | Bedroom |
Syair in background |
| 36 | 4 | |
Ina opens her eyes | Close up | Ina’s face | Bedroom |
Syair in background |
| 37 | 3 | |
Ina curled up at the top corner of her bed |
Medium shot |
Ina | Bedroom |
Syair in background |
| 38 | 3 |
match | Ina is moving the doll more aggressively, feeling the pain of her flashback | Medium shot | Ina | Bedroom |
Syair |
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39 | 3 | |
Ina still curled up in the bed. She hesitates to go open the door |
character dolly in | Ina | Bedroom |
Syair in background Knocking door |
| 40 | 3 |
do someting with d positioning/ maybe rotate shot have to match the doll in 39 |
She moves forward as if to the door but backs off. Not sure of what to do |
Crane top to front |
Ina | Bedroom |
Syair in background Knocking door |
| 41 | 4 |
n the camera rotates | Ina holding the doll closer and calming the doll, asking it to stay quiet |
Crane top to front |
Ina | Bedroom |
Syair |
| 42 | 3 |
match dissolve | Calming the doll down and asking to not make a sound |
Close up |
Ina's hand |
Bedroom |
Syair |
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43 | 3 |
match dissolve / noise of the door |
She curls up on the bed | Close up | Ina | Bedroom |
Syair in background |
| 45 | 3 |
the noise (door) carries on / cut or quick dissolve |
Long shadow of father on the floor, standing at the door |
Medium long shot |
Father silhouette and shadow | Bedroom |
Syair in background |
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close up if d spider wrapping up d fly | |||||||
| 46 | 3 |
that cu transform into the fish movement |
Silhouette of father whispering to her on the bed |
Medium shot |
Father and ina silhouette | Bedroom | |
| 47 | 3 |
the fish posture blends with the father's hand |
Father’s hand touching her face slowly |
Medium close up |
Ina and father’s hand | Bedroom | |
| 48 | 4 |
the big fish chassing with the baby fish (sort of playing games with em |
Cut to haruan fish eating its own babies |
Extreme angle | Fishes |
Outside, pond |
Syair in background |
| 50 | 3 |
match the light source with the eye |
Her tears are welling up in her eye |
Extreme close up |
Ina’s eye |
NIL | Syair |
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51 | 3 | |
A drop of tear falls down | Camera fall down | Tear drop | NIL | Syair |
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52 | 2 |
the tear drop hits on d surface of the fish tank, with the baby fishes playing on d surface | Tear dropping | Camera still follows down | Tear drop | Bedroom |
Syair |
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53 | 3 |
the av more drop more falling with dissolve into the rain...-dissolve the rain falling on the roof top
| Tear drop hitting the ground |
Fall down and crane down | Tear drop | Bedroom |
Syair |
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54 | 3 |
pan down , rain is in d foreground |
Rain hitting ground outside | camera hold | Rain | Outside |
Syair |
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56 | 2 | |
Rain falling |
Crane down |
Rain |
Outside of house |
Syair |
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58 | 3 | |
Ina standing at the window | Medium shot | Ina | Window |
Syair |
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59 | 3 |
cut ... she hears another cough |
Ina standing at the window | High angle wide shot | Ina | Bedroom |
Syair |
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60 | 2 |
tighter.. maybe with the cigar | Father opens door | Close up | Father’s hand | Bedroom |
Syair stops |
| 61 | 2 | ![]() she turns her head to see who is coming.. lighting occur |
Ina turn to look |
Medium shot |
Ina | Bedroom |
NIL |
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62 | 5 |
69.4%
happens in buildings and the home
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Message screen | Camera still | NIL | NIL | NIL |
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msg 2: you give her life you feed her then you destroy her!! | |||||||
| 65 | 4 |
fade up / no animation at all.. just sound effects / the effects like rain falling on the glass | Ina sitting and one of her drawing flies and lands next to her |
medium shot |
Ina , Drawing | Bedroom window | Rain |
| 67 | 3 |
dissolve
/ the rain drops on the drawing, smudges the colour pencils | Drawing shows her and her mother. Slowly, the paper is soaked from beneath, by the rain drops on the floorboards. | Close up on paper | NIL | Bedroom window | rain |
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68 | 4 |
match dissolve .. the fish comes in eat the baby fish at the same some at the gal in the drawings ... fish carries on eating the rest of the baby fishes.... the fish go out swim fast... the tail wave the water that blur the camera .. fade out END ..fade out
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Haruan fish is chasing small baby haruan fishes to end the story. That's a famous poerty in Malay "Haruan Makan Ikan" which means incest case happening in family! END |
Spin look | Haruan fishes |
Pond |
water |