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TITLE: BEHIND DOORS

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Picture

Action

Camera

Character/

Animated Subject

Background

Audio

00

4

Introduction

Camera

hold

Montage

sequences

Mixed media

Syair

01

3

match dissolve with the keey hole ( d fish go at the key hole)

House Still,  leaf flown down from tree, wind blow

Angle on

, Long shot

leaf

Kampong house

syair

04

2

NIL

Close- up

NIL

Kampong  house door knob

TV  comedy program

Sound fade in slowly

05

3

dissolve

NIL

Extreme

Close up

NIL

Door knob keyhole

TV program volume increase

07

2

NIL

Medium

shot

NIL

House living

room

TV program sound

08

3

pan

NIL

Close up

NIL

Living room

Fade sound of TV

09

4

pan

Hand with cigarette. Rocking chair in front of TV

Medium shot

Hand,

smoke

Living room

Sound of TV

  close up (tighther ) crop    

11

4

follow the smoke up

Father exhale the smoke

Close up

Mouth

Living room

TV

Breathing sound

12

3

smoke dissolve into d spider , d spider dosent move

Insect trapped in a spider web

Close up

Small insect

Bedroom

Slow humming

13

4

match dissolve, school bag, uniform on bed ready 4 tomoro neatly

Ina sitting in front of mirror

High angle wide shot

Ina

Fan

Bedroom

Humming of Syair becomes more audible

14

3

pan out from the book to d next shot ( math books) neet, complete

Ina in front of the mirror

High angle medium shot

Ina

Bedroom

Humming

15

2

tilt up from d books

Stack of school books and drawings

Camera pan Close up

NIL

Bedroom

Humming

18

3

dissoilve (lightning - little reaction)

Ina holding and caressing doll

Medium shot

Ina

Bedroom

Window at the back

Humming

Thunder

19

3

see reacting with d doll (thunder)

Ina shocked by the sound of thunder

Extreme close up

Ina facial expression

Bedroom

Thunder calming down

20

3

flip she react numb to the thunder ( she hears daddy caughing) exmp -jerry

Ina turned to face the window

Medium close up

Ina

Bedroom

Breathing

Slow thunder

22

4

dissolve - thunder

She slides a bit to back out of the brightness of the lightning

Wide high angle

Ina

bedroom

Slow thunder

23

2

she stands up

She stands up to get to the door

Medium shot

Ina

Bedroom

 

24

3

add cu .. closer up to the hand -

She locks her door

Medium shot

Ina

Bedroom

 

25

3

clearer - she drops the key maybe - cos of coughing again - drop d key knocks books

She moves back to the mirror

High angle close up

Ina’s legs

Bedroom floor

Her footsteps

26

3

more clearer in knocking the key nad books

She accidentally knocks a stack of neatly stacked books

Medium shot

Ina from waist above

Bedroom

Ina gasp

27

3

She quickly bend down

Medium shot

Ina

Bedroom

 

28

3

is a close up of 27

Her hand reaches out to arrange the books

Close up

Ina

Bedroom

 

29

3

pan up quickly the smoke into the spider

Hand put out cigarette

Close up

Father’s hand

Living room

Hissing sound of cigarette

30

4

spider head towards the insect zooming

Father gets up from the chair

Medium shot

Father

Living room

 

31

4

dissolve / combing try match dissolve with the spider with the doll with the eye zooming

Ina is combing the doll’s hair

Close up

Hand holding doll

Bedroom

Syair

32

3

dissolve / morphing

Ina is sleeping

High angle shot

Ina

Bedroom

Syair

Knocking on the door

Calling her

33

3

cut

Father knocking on her door and calling her name

Low angle shot

NIL

Bedroom

Syair

Knocking

Calling Ina's name

34

2

Ina moves in her sleep

Zoom to middle shot

Ina

Bedroom

Syair in background

35

3

Knocking continues

Low angle shot

NIL

Bedroom

Syair in background

36

4

Ina opens her eyes

Close up

Ina’s face

Bedroom

Syair in background

37

3

Ina curled up at the top corner of her bed

Medium shot

Ina

Bedroom

Syair in background

38

3

match

Ina is moving the doll more aggressively, feeling the pain of her flashback

Medium shot

Ina

Bedroom

Syair

39

3

Ina still curled up in the bed. She hesitates to go open the door

character dolly in

Ina

Bedroom

Syair in background

Knocking door

40

3

do someting with d positioning/ maybe rotate shot have to match the doll in 39

She moves forward as if to the door but backs off. Not sure of what to do

Crane top to front

Ina

Bedroom

Syair in background

Knocking door

41

4

n the camera rotates

Ina holding the doll closer and calming the doll, asking it to stay quiet

Crane top to front

Ina

Bedroom

Syair

42

3

match dissolve

Calming the doll down and asking to not make a sound

Close up

Ina's hand

Bedroom

Syair

43

3

match dissolve / noise of the door

She curls up on the bed

Close up

Ina

Bedroom

Syair in background

45

3

the noise (door) carries on / cut or quick dissolve

Long shadow of father on the floor, standing at the door

Medium long shot

Father silhouette and shadow

Bedroom

Syair in background

  

close up if d spider wrapping up d fly

     

46

3

that cu transform into the fish movement

Silhouette of father whispering to her on the bed

Medium shot

Father and ina silhouette

Bedroom

 

47

3

the fish posture blends with the father's hand

Father’s hand touching her face slowly

Medium close up

Ina and father’s hand

Bedroom

 

48

4

the big fish chassing with the baby fish (sort of playing games with em

Cut to haruan fish eating its own babies

Extreme angle

Fishes

Outside, pond

Syair in background

50

3

match the light source with the eye

Her tears are welling up in her eye

Extreme close up

Ina’s eye

NIL

Syair

51

3

A drop of tear falls down

Camera fall down

Tear drop

NIL

Syair

52

2

the tear drop hits on d surface of the fish tank, with the baby fishes playing on d surface

Tear dropping

Camera still follows down

Tear drop

Bedroom

Syair

53

3

the av more drop more falling with dissolve into the rain...-dissolve the rain falling on the roof top

Tear drop hitting the ground

Fall down and crane down

Tear drop

Bedroom

Syair

54

3

pan down , rain is in d foreground

Rain hitting ground outside

camera hold

Rain

Outside

Syair

56

2

Rain falling

Crane down

Rain

Outside of house

Syair

58

3

Ina standing at the window

Medium shot

Ina

Window

Syair

59

3

cut ... she hears another cough

Ina standing at the window

High angle wide shot

Ina

Bedroom

Syair

60

2

tighter.. maybe with the cigar

Father opens door

Close up

Father’s hand

Bedroom

Syair stops

61

2
she turns her head to see who is coming.. lighting occur

Ina turn to look

Medium shot

Ina

Bedroom

NIL

62

5


no execuse be violent....no need to mention..maybe juistgive the igure of statistic...50.5 or 69.4 ... 82.3 something no saying is rape....u give her life, u feed her , u rape her , u destroy her life

69.4% happens in buildings and the home
50.5% were made to girls (daughters) under the age of 16
it is usually done by a family member or friend

 

 

Message screen

Camera stillNIL NIL NIL
  

msg 2:

you give her life

you feed her

then you destroy her!!

     

65

4

fade up / no animation at all.. just sound effects / the effects like rain falling on the glass

Ina sitting and one of her drawing flies and lands next to her

medium shot

Ina ,

Drawing

Bedroom window

Rain

673


dissolve / the rain drops on the drawing, smudges the colour pencils

Drawing shows her and her mother. Slowly, the paper is soaked from beneath, by the rain drops on the floorboards.Close up on paperNILBedroom windowrain

68

4

match dissolve .. the fish comes in eat the baby fish at the same some at the gal in the drawings ... fish carries on eating the rest of the baby fishes....

the fish go out swim fast... the tail wave the water that blur the camera .. fade out

END ..fade out

 

Haruan fish is chasing small baby haruan fishes to end the story.

That's a famous poerty in Malay "Haruan Makan Ikan" which means incest case happening in family!

END

Spin look

Haruan fishes

Pond

water